Thanks for all coments!

The shape of the head bothers me somehow, but I love the design. Kind of large on the shirt as well. Good, but needs some tweaking.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18717/What_do_you_call_it

work on the head and give it some the whole design more textures similar to what you have on the tail

I'd also like to see if there will be a beak? Maybe look at a puffin's beak if you want to keep the original shape of the head? I'd also like to see more detail on the branch it's standing on. I dig the placement. Good luck. Please crit mine.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18876/Twilight

and now? :)

I think that if it's going to be on the front of the shirt, it should be somewhat smaller and lower. Right now, it looks like it's choking the pooor model. I prefered the black and white version, too.

Mind giving mine a critique?

ok, black and white in little size?

and now?

plis..

I really liked the orginal size and placement. I love the wrap placement in general--it's pretty unusual and visually interesting. I like the colours for v2, too. I think those colours, on the wrapped placement, maybe on royal? That could be awesome.

interesting style, Love the V1.

thanks guys..

I agree with Aya Girl and prefer the placing and size on the original. This works too. Black and white or colour, although I wasn't too keen on those in V2.

Critique me?