ready for .... action?

ready for making it not a mirror image.

lolz

It's pretty cool other than that. I think it could have pretty good symmetry without it being exactly the same on each side. Work on that!

i really think it's a solid design regardless of the mirroring...



i say sub it. however it CAN (not necessarily should) do with mixing up the mirroring so it's not exactly the same on each side.



but it's able (in my eyes) to be subbed as is)

omg the kitties! :) i find it extremely cute.. i dont really like the one-tooth boy tho.. but the kitties i love!! :)

*toothed

i wanted it to be a mirror design, although i guess it doesnt work when you use characters instead of basic design elements? maybe it makes it confusing?

nope but peopel are finikey..really flighty with what theyl;ike or whatever...



also i think people fallinto the critique trap. they tend to look for something wrong, a mark to improve, but sometimes things can be good they way they are...i think this is fine...just fine. i MIGHT try to mix it up, but really with the existing design, i don't think it matters.



but then, i'm not anal, not picky about things like this...



check out some of the other crits i have made...you'll see that i am no featherlight crit sissy.



if it doesn't hurt you to do so, you could try and give the "variant" idea a stab.

Great colors, but too kid-like for my tastes. Though it is rendered well. Sub it and I'll 3 it.

Very Power Puff Girl-y... but that doesn't make it bad. Good job...

take a look ate his site...it's pretty impressive with a lot of superflat style work (just without the creepy dirtyness)...yeh it's good stuff and so is this...



mezo, if he subbed this, this could be a KIDS shirt...threadless does print for the kiddies. so you could $5 it for that alone.

hey thanks octo



btw our site is outdated, here is more recent work

cute and nice colors

yea, this is cute as hell, but very power puff. there seem to be a lot of designs in this kinda cute vein, and they all do well, so go for it!

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reminds me of jon burgerman!

hehe... powerpuffBOYZ, make some small differences in the mirroring, different eyes on all of them could be all that you need!