This is my first submission. I just did the lace on the back but then decided to add to the front so it\'s not too simple.



Should it just be plain lace and no front design?



Should it be something different on the front since hearts are done a lot?



Or should the heart design be on front with nothing on the back?



Or do i just trash the whole concept?

I think the wings and heart are great! I would place it on the front as you have it in the photo. Not sure about the lace??? Definitely not so big and not on front or back.. perhaps small on one side? just an idea.

I love the colors. The lace on the back is really a good concept, but I think it should be smaller. I also like the heart design, but... what about submitting them as two different tees?

I agree that the lace on the back should be narrower, the front works very well, nice placement.

Do just plain lace up (on the back of course). I would buy it in a heartbeat.

Alright i made it narrower, aligned the eyelets and spaced them evenly, dropped the front design which will be its own design later.

great! will it work with other colors ?

Yes! I love it!!! I don't mind the pink. White or red would be goo colors for laces as well.

i like it. it kind of reminds me of a straight jacket cool!

err this is just too simple a bunch of these type of designs have been done

I really like it, definitely submit :)



Critique mine too?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19010/Butterflies_Instead

will it be printed on front or back? but yeah, definitely submit this!

On the back, thanks. I submitted it separately from this since the push to running is not working for me.

why does this look nothing like the thumbnail? i feel raped.

because i changed the original design, the heart was removed lol

What is wrong with people? Say something if you don't think it should be submitted! I love this! And would buy it in a heartbeat!!

i think its a kinda simple design...

I really loved the heart. Not as big a fan of the laces. Maybe a separate shirt later on to further the heart idea?

i think its really hott lol

but im not into the colors.

The simplicity is the beauty of it. Such a cool idea. Kinda limits your audience with its stripperishnicity, but it also almost turns a shirt into a freaking gallery piece.

needs some work or underwork, it's neither simple nor detailed, kind of stuck in the middle which I don't like. Nice idea though..

this is creative, i like it its simple, but simple is goood!

critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27208/The_Future_is_Awesome

it's a cool idea.

maybe it just needs further detailing, like adding creases or shadows to the lace.

other than that, i say it was a wise idea to keep it clean in the front.

hey thats a cool idea i know a few people who would like that - any othe colour options?????



could you critique mine??

Nice idea.



check me

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27741/No_music_no_life

nice everything but i would say the front and back ideas dont match

you can go with one and then with the other on other



try a simple ribbon symbol in front with back design

and with other you can have strings attaching to the back till shirt end..

i would like if you critique mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28565/atoz

people still comment on this!? i never noticed.



anyways i see urbanoutfitters kind of ran with the lace idea, not the same way but ya know



http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp;jsessionid=A1B0668451C77B3369697A98B6B2C317.app12-node7?itemdescription=true&itemCount=10&startValue=11&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=15331325&parentid=W_APP_TEES_GRAPHIC&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=24&navAction=jump&color=

arghhhh

You probably don't check this any more, but go with the lace up the back idea for a submit. I didn't see the urban outfitters tee, and I agree that the lace could be thinner and you should lose the graphics on the front, but with some work this idea would be a total buy for me!