this is my first design, the baloon looked much better with a white shine but as the limit is 5 colors it had to be changed.



critique away.

I put cool but needs work. But I would have checked cool, but needs TONS of work. I really like the idea but your design skills need improving. This would benefit some good perspective and a lot more detail in the city. Maybe try to fix it and spend more time on it.

thanks, i found it hard putting detail in because of the color limit and pspx has its downfalls in this area

any suggestions anyone?

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Your lines are really rough. The balloon looks out of proportion.



I only see four colors...Red and three grays. As simple as the city drawing is, you really shouldn't need more than gray, black, and white to make it work.



You definitely need to spend a lot more time sharpening this up if you're serious about it.

if you want to use white for the balloon do it cause it would look a lot better. change the black windows to white.

Make the balloon a LOT bigger, especially the top of it so it looks like we're looking down upon it. Try moving the city closer to the middle of the shirt and make it bigger with cleaner lines as well.

k thanks...



if anyone can help that would be great...im really new at this

Maybe for the shine on the balloon you could put no colour at all so that it is simply the colour of the t shirt. Thus if the t shirt colours remain light, it should look better than that darkish grey you have now?

Big time clean up needed. The line style is too different between the balloon and the buildings. You also need to make the road lines way thinner and more neat.