A project I worked on for my silkscreen class on war and peace

Nice, maybe bring in some of the cross hatching detail to the tails of the banner and the grenade?

The grenade is definantly very flat. It'll need some detail added to give it some texture so it doesn't stick out so much.

I also don't know if I could see this being a print considering they've already done a war and peace shirt that blows this one away. The one with a dove and grenade. It was absolutely brilliant. This just isn't doing much for me.

thanks for the opinion jpiatt, i definitely ned to bring the flatness out of the grenade. I guess its a matter of an opinion about the other war and peace design, I actually dont prefer it very much (even without my design)

Funky love it, not sure it needs the red stripes as it takes attention away from rest of the design ? Maybe a larger peace sign and the peace sign more prominent with a lighter colour tone ?



Crit mine;



Red Cell Love

Stary

Man of Mind

Pharaoh

i like it!

thanks for the help!

yeah definately get some texture into the grenade. Other than that I think its really good.