I know PCs have darker monitors than macs, so let me know if you can\'t see this. It is supposed to be a dark print, Like the type tee \"Death, our nations #1 killer\"

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Really nice! Very clean :) It does look a TINY dark on my monitor, but I'm using a PC and I think it is fine in actuality, because I can still see it.

really good i think :)

made the shafts of wheat darker.

Awww, the mighty mouse is coming to destroy your happy thoughts! Great imagery. Not sure if you really need the scroll banner at the bottom.



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Maybe the bomb shaft could be darker too

I like the design, very clean, very technically sound. Not a big fan of the idea behind it though. Mostly because I can't see voters getting behind an anti-disney shirt. And even if they did, I can't see threadless printing it.

Good design, but wrong audience.

Cool idea. I'd twick the facial details a bit to make the micky mouse stand out a little more.



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i like it for its subtlty... im not sure if you could change anything its good as is

Good idea but its too dark to be noticeable, like the original but a reduced scale and some text maybe ?



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Not bad :)

added a bit more depth to the multiculturalism to look less anti-disney.

*depth to the multinationalism to look...*

now it looks anti-disney and anti-pepsi

HA! You missed McDonalds.



In all seriousness it is supposed to be anti... but anti-multinational conglomerates and not a particular company per se.

this could also be seen as anti-america

eggshells buddy, egg shells!

well, they all started in america, but I'm certain people will notice mickey, the arches and pepsi no matter their homeland.



but anyone looking for a reason to find this anti-american will find it anyways. So I guess I can't worry.

I admire your ability to hold back on the contrast. It looks very proffesional but I have to say I prefer the earlier versions. this looks a bit cluttered. I dont think that there's anything wrong with being anti-disney (where do I sign?) or anti pepsi. I do think that it's very ambitious to try and do something that's anti nationality and corporations in the same design and expect it to communicate. Mentioning specific logos or characters is'nt enough for that. it has to be something more general. good luck! I'm off to do mutant chickens :)

thanks, I am on the verge of agreeing with the clutter statement. I'm internally battling over version 2 versus version 3. I like a wider view of different corporations, but the first one was much more streamlined...

This is the BOMB! I would place it a little lower on the Hoodie. Ignore comments about this being anti-american. It is anti-multinationals if anything. Great design!

Hey there, I dig the concept of this piece.



Combining the elegance of the laurel wreath, with the strong image of the bombs makes for a strong concept.



I also like your subtle colors. I'm definitely personally a fan of that, when it's done on purpose and done good; which you pulled off nicely.



I DO see a pepsi logo as pointed out above, but only after it was pointed out. I also didn't see the disney thing until after it waqs pointed out.



I like your attempt to add more of lack-of-ink near around the bottom of the big center comb, but as again pointed out, now I keep seeing McDonalds.



I don't know if I would consider it a big problem or not. For the most part, I really like your design and would buy it as is. Those things people pointed out might be seen b y others, but I personally didn't see them until it was pointed out.





But on the other hand, if others see those accidental symbols, tey might mistake the meaning of your concept. And if protecting your original concept is important, than I'd say try shifting some elements around and maybe turn some off ( in terms of the face and "ears" )

thanks for the critiques and suggestions!

Great design! I prefer the first version, I wouldn´t add anything to it.

subliminal messages and stuff very cool, Anti america ?I wouldnt worry bout that I dont think so

I really like what you have going on here now. It's not specific to just one thing like Disney. I am very impressed how you worked in the Pepsi and McDonalds logos. I do think that if you could work in a few more this would be amazing. 3 logos is good but if you could find a way to do a few more it would make it that more anti-multinational huge corporation.

thanks for the comments. I will see if I can find another multinational corp. with a round logo to make the ears more asymetric.



And chlobo107, I see what you're saying about mickey being the least definable, but I think that portion would be too large to refine without making the iconic face of Mickey too obvious.



thanks for the great crits folks!

Aren't those copyrighted symbols though? Or do they need to be coloured in order to break copyright laws?



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Very interesting, I would add a bit more contrast on the side bombs, there' hard to make out. the top is outdone by the shine. But other than that, nice statement.

here I altered the "pepsi" logo a lot more, added a "GL" logo that has a likeness to the "GE" logo to make this more asymetric.



As before, let me know which of the latest 3 versions you like best, if at all.

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Was about to say copyright infringement on GE, then noticed you used GL. Pepsi logo might cause some issues for copyright infringement though.



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Possible copyright issues, brilliant regardless.

every logo has been altered, colors are not the same, and all the line work is different, so if held next to eachother, the differences would be obvious. So I'm reasonably sure it's fine, especially with all the parody shirts I've seen.



I don't have a single submit from this version, can I get some suggestions?

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any suggestions?

bump

pretty cool design

thanks.

one last bump before submission!

I pushed it through, thanks for the critiques!



http://www.threadless.com/submission/159974/multinational?streetteam=Papaprime

lol hmm its not bad just noway to pass copy rights,,, i think 99% will be declined wish u luck anyway

it was already declined, thanks for digging up the critique and the wish for luck :D

Clever mashup of the mc's.. design seems really cohesive.. submit!





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