Red cell love what do you guys think ?

Have you tried to make an actual pattern with the design using the align tools? Could have it a bit smaller.

looks nice , the only thing i would change is the blue center of the hearts try another color and maybe some other color tee that would bring the red out more



critique mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/18706/reaching_for_a_star#v2

I mean to align them diagonally, as the design is very organic and the use of strict alignment could be something to try. Colors are always a tough choice.

I think it might be interesting to see one or two of the diamond sections with the colors flipped.

I agree with ZN, I don't like the light blue with the red, and I'd like to see this on a different colour shirt, perhaps black?

Nice, I think there are too many repetitions though. The individual diamond graphic is great if it were on its own even! Or just one diamond with 4 of the corner graphics so it forms a square? Not sure if thats clear what i mean?. :-)

Too many repetitions for me too, makes it look rather boring and shifts the attention away from the actual design itself.

Thanks for the suggestions guys i'll amend and upload a few variations based on your comments.

I really like this. I would wear it.

I too would like to see it in other colours.

I think it's too big on the shirt. and... lacks an edge, if you want it to have a better chance think of something cooler to texturize

I don't mind the repetitiveness-- but I'd like to see it on a different shirt color! Just might feel less like it's just sitting on it that way.

I like it!

head's up, don't spam designs on the running with links to your c4ritiques/designs, is one of threadless unwritten rules

oooh i like this alot...very cute! id buy it!

this is flashy seventeen..cool..