Stary shirt pattern comments plz.

Could just have the central design without the bottom and sleeves. Work up the design and make it more intricate and detailed.

I like the pattern, but it almost seems like it would work better on an actual nice shirt not a t shirt, but I'm not sure that is right...

I like it, it's got class. The solid white part of the star design is a little too solid for me, though... I'd like to see it have a little more intricacy to break it up, like add some details in that part. (I hope that made sense.) I'm personally not a fan of red t-shirts, but that's just me.



And just FYI, it's spelled "starry," unless you mean that it's looking at you very intently.

I'd do away with the bottom and sleeves too, takes too much attention off the central piece.

Thanks guys i'll amend.

funky :D

I dunno dude, maybe I just dont get textures... It's pretty but I'd rather buy something with a message. just my opinion

It looks very much like a christmas sweater, and that kind of kitsch has paid off well for a certain select shirt.



Personally, I'd go with that kitsch feel and ad a textured element to the largest star to make it look like it's woven from wool.

I'd appreciate a critique:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18824/multinational

You've probably figured this out, but it's spelled "Starry". Definitely a Christmas sweater.

I like big star - it's bold and dramatic.



I agree there is too much solid, maybe try cutting out the smaller star around the outside from the solid part of the inner star (does that makes sense!!).



I like the curly parts coming out of the star, they add a quirky type feel - could they be used more in the design making it less pointy.



I also agree the repeats on the sleeves and bottom of shirt detract from the main design.

nice design, its cool..but idk if it could be a shirt

Updated v1 with black tee, blobs and removed small stars, please critique.

I would like to see more detail or some kind of design on the larger star since it seems to be the focal point. Maybe a smaller versions of that star placed somewhere else on the shirt would be an interesting detail as well like how you have circles on the shoulders and in the corner. Good luck. Please crit mine:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/18876/Twilight

funny..3 for you..(^-^)..