I didn\'t get any feedback when up for voting. So looking for some imput.

doesn't say much, too literal. It's a naive design.

Like it funky and quirky some text like Kaboom ?

@jimmiiko: Sure it's straightforward, but what's wrong with litteral art? Granted there's no great message here, but then again maybe the message is in there being no need for one... or something. I'm happy for the imput but if you could elaborate or provide suggestions I would very much appreciate it.



@actonacto: Thanks! I thought it looked neat enough. Text might be the way to go to add something to it.



Should have a cleaner image up later on today, keep the constructive criticism comming! If you don't like it please let me know why not!

The preview keeps squishing the image, so if anyone could help me on that it would be greatly appreciated.



Otherwise, few minor changes, some colour, biggest change is dropping the bordering orange on the inside detail.



Looking for all the imput I can get, so if you take a look;

Please let me know what you think.

Nice design makes you think!!!

It looks stunning against the blue background -- I would submit it as is.

most definitely as is! the blue background is much better than the original, I like it! cool style!

I wish people who voted don't submit, would actually say why. It's unhelpful and insulting all at once, the point of this area is to critique... And annoymous votes against don't really fit that bill.



Anyways, thanks for the comments. I like it on blue, if I resubmit it, it will definitely be on Navy. My only concern is that without the border the colours are too close for me to use the orange for the bottom clouds.

not a huge fan, although...if you're knowledgeable about stenciling you could possibly make the cloud in the loose shape of Einstein which would also give it the meaning people believe it is lacking

I think you are loosing the main part of the mushroom cloud, because of the lack of contrast with the surrounding colours. I think this might have far more 'punch' if you made the mushroom cloud the same colour as the frame.

Bit of a touchup, changed the explosion colour to that of the ring, and brought in yellow for more contrast, in the arcs and inside the white, which used to be the same colour as the ring

What is that?

much better! I think it's ready for submission!

critique mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/18853/Ophelia_Phosphorus

I like that the cloud doesn't have the yellow outline; for some reason, it makes it look smoother. The colors and the image are very nice.

Is there some sort of hidden images within the nuke blast?



Critique - Light Discrimination v5

Nothing hidden, though if you want to find anything in it, then you're welcome to. Unfortunately I think that might be part of the problem, it looks like there should be hidden things but there aren't. I've considered hidding things in it, but I don't have the time to do it at the moment. And I honestly don't think it needs it.



Thanks for all the input so far, keep it comming.

simple is best imo, haha (i used imo) but yeah i think its fly the way it is brosive.

It looks like a cloud picking its nose.

Uggh, well version 4 is the intended update... though it's gotten pixelized on me. Thats the intended layout in anycase. Any thoughts on moving anything around or the like?

Yes, version 4 is a little pixelated, but you can still see the design clearly, it looks much better, can't see version five.

Well, I can't see version 5, but from the looks of the other versions and version 4 its pretty interesting. Not much to think about though, it's just there.

Great overall design.

its cool if ur into that kinda thing, i do like the design but i wouldnt wear it...i dont thik u could add more to it tho, looks good the way it is!

hahaha btw i RLY like ur slogans!!

I can't see version 5 either.

But versions 1-4 look a bit funky. If it's supposed to be a mushroom cloud it's not very clear at a glance.

I think the bold color is great but I'm sure how it would read on clothes.

Alright, this should be the final submission version. I think I've got everything where I want it and the colours are more or less set (i think). Anything still glaring at anyone? Or time to toss it to the wolves...



Thanks for everyones comments.

I really like this final version here. Maybe a darker shade of orange? Or just make that shade with less opacity, I just think it looks like a sticker with that shade.

Agreed. The contrast between the bright orange of the circle and the dark shirt colors is a bit weird. Other than that, perfect, and ready for submission.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/18495/Moondial

maybe make the top cloud into a fist. kinda like the black pather's logo?

I like the last version more... maybe more work on the central cloud...

Ok, so a minor change to go with a couple suggestions, just switched the lower cloud colour for the main one/ring. Hope this is what people had in mind. I can't get the contrast I had in #3 as the shirts just don't come in that shade.



Thanks for all the input, hopefully I'm working in the right direction.

Me likes a loooot, jus tlower on the tee, ive never seen designs

almost touching the collar. Like it on blue.