Mind of man abstract.

What kind of placement were you thinking about? Also, I love the colors and the "brushwork" design of the lines.

center of the Tshirt i suppose ?

maybe you could have more of these dot/ circle things around the human. and they could get less and less symmetrical and spread about the shirt. placing could be more to one side.

I... don't get it? I understand that it's abstracted, but even at that I don't really understand where it's going.



Looks cool, but needs work.

Bubbles to me mean blood cells and the man in coded within them something i conjured up, thanks for the suggestions i'll amend.

Hey, I like this design...would be good to see how it looks on a t-shirt.

Shirt version still need to adjust this slightly.

I think you should play with the colors a bit. Connect the character to the design with a background color or design they seem to sit on there own too much.

I don't really get it... if there's something to "get"... I prefer your other design that incorporates those red circles (the one with the hearts, too).

I think you need a shirt color that is either complimentary or echoes one of the colors in the design. It looks a little bare, even though it's pretty intricate already.



I'd appreciate a critique:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18824/multinational

I'm afraid I dont get it either...



The red and green also seems a little clashing to me, not sure if it was meant to be that way :P

The texture is pretty but the charcter is too basic for my taste. also If you're doing something loose by hand you're kind of killing the human touch by duplicating and mirroring. do it all yourself, dont be lazy :)

i am not sure what is trying to be conveyed.

i like the patterns in all 3 of your designs (this, blood, stars)

but as for the message in this one.... i dont quite grasp it