Hey
I\'ve been working on this for quite a while.
Any ideas how to make it better?

Thanks

Now i see there's a line missing in the SWF menu, ignore it, it'll be fixed! :)

i adore this!

it reminds me of that level in zombies ate my neighbours on the snes

i think you might need to make it slightly more overt that he's a gardener (maybe make the hedges in the background more obviously sculpted)

I think its great. its a similar idea to Dark side of the Garden but different.

I think you need to work on the background or foreground a bit, to me the bushes could look a little more bush-like.

fantastic start though

it could be larger on the shirt as well.

I didn't see that Vader design before, but I think mine's different enough.. isn't it?

Thanks for the comments.

Looks great. The gardener is almost loveable. If you want to make him meaner maybe have the arm on the figure to the left chopped off on the grass.

i think it's different enough, the illustration is great and i prefer this one

but the background is not working quite right, it seems too forcefully place on the tee rather than flowing with it, i think you should make it more organic, more faded

maybe just leave the main charater, make the grass the color of tee maybe just with highlights, and maybe some bushes/trees shaped as people with some limbs cut off

anyways looking really good, good luck to you

awe! he's not so bad after all! just like edward scissorhands... just misunderstood.

looks totally awesome and ready for submission to me!

I like it, but perhaps need to make the hedge pruning more obvious, maybe have another foreground shape on the left as well as right?

don't change the gardner. it really isn't a lot like dark side of the garden at all; this is terribly original!

i like the placement; but some more cut shrubs in background

to whoever said don't submit; FUCK YOU! ;D

here are mine if you have any interest:
1st
2nd

yes..your illustration is SUPER awesome, love the ideas and lines work!! welldone!!! SUBMIT PLSSS!!

Love it but where the outer shape is smooth is a bit uncomfortable - make it more like the right side?

this design is pretty dope, i love your illustration style. it does feel a little awkward on the right side, but none the less like i it. I don't know if u can make it much better then how it is, maybe just a slight bit bigger on the shirt? thats all i would say

Dude i think its totally cool, I love your illustration style, maybe it needs a bit more in the concept tho, like maybe he could have chopped the head off one of the teddy bear shrubs, Its stil pretty cool tho you could probably submit it anyway

awesome concept, would definitely buy if it gets printed!
like others said, the outer right needs some more definition/contrast, hard to make out from afar.
I'm liking the army-green better also.

Submit!

Thank you all for the great feedback and helpful comments!
I'm gonna work on it a bit more, and make some tweaks & fixes.
v2 coming soon! :)

Ha! Excellent! The only thing I'd suggest to reinforce your concept is maybe a decapitated bush.

Great concept! Maybe you could add some extra cut shrubs in the background. Waiting for v2...

Great illustration. love the style. you can calmly submit it as it is. If you're interested in making it perfect I think you can just eat out of the smooth outlint in the shape of leafs or grass. dont go into inner details or anything. make it look like silluetes (excuse my spelling) of leafs.

wanna see mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/18760/There_s_something_living_under_my_potato

It took a while, but here's a new version.
I took most of your comments into consideration.

thanks for the great inputs!

what do you think? is it ready? :)

Yep, I'd sub that bad boy on army green, looks awesomeness.

pretty sweet man.

This is great! It does have lot of work, I definitely submit it.
Thanks for your advice on mine, by the way.

Great for the horror comp, sub now.

I'd submit that, looks great. Have a look here http://www.threadless.com/critique/31832/Dreams_Of_A_Doormat

Great illustration and concept. Sub away!

really well done, submit :)

do it i dare u haha its awesome

thanks for the amazing feedbacks!
I'm gonna push this into the running soon, hope you'll be there to give it some $$$'s :)

Great concept!
Comment on mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/31571/second_thoughts

Definitely ready to go. Great job.

Very rad!

Ok, thats good!

good job.submit it.
if you have time please look at mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/31932/little_tees

sweet!

Very nice.

I didn't read the other critiques. Sorry if I repeat. Why bunnies? Why not people running and screaming. That would be something a psycho would carve out of shrubbery.

Thank you guys for the great feedbacks!
Well, I'm pushing it!

haha that's cute. good luck!

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Hey all, thanks again for the feedbacks and comments.
It's in the running, and I'll be glad to get your vote!
Yes Wii can