Wow, really good design. I'd buy it. I think it would be interesting if the pattern went onto the sleeve as well, but it's also fine as is. Submit it.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18495/Moondial

I agree that it should probably go onto the sleeve, if it can. Otherwise the picture just cuts off too quickly.

It's cool though. I like it.

Cheers :j

Oh, any thoughts on colour? I wasn't too sure so i put a few up.

That's the great thing about black, it looks good on all those colors. Unless you're planning to change the color of the pattern, I'd just stay away from shirt colors that are too light, too dark, or too grey.

Yeah, so. With the sleeve?

wow, this is a big design, have you though of using the same technique to create an animal or somthing? threadless loves highly detailed creature, good work!

Neat, thanks. Yeah this is my first ever so i might branch out a bit next time :j

Does anyone know if they can actually print like this? I had a look at the belt printing thing but i wasn't sure...

Neat! I like this a lot. I would guess that they would be able to print this, the only trouble you could run into is on the shoulder. Could you add some more detail to the right side? Even if you don't want to, I think it still looks great!!!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18031/Adoption_isn_t_always_the_best_option

Have a look :)

Yeah that's what i thought originally, but other comments thought it needed a sleeve design. I sort of like the way it spreads from just one side, i think putting anything on the other side would be too overwhelming.