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what do you think ?

i want to marry his chin...

cutesy and simple. i like it.

this is a really cute character but i find that his nose not being outlined in black while absolutely everything else is, is a bit weird.

also, the way he's 'holding' that spike ball's string (pardon me i forgot the term for that weapon) looks as if he's not holding it at all. the string should technically be on the other side of his hand

Very nice. I like you're style. Submit.

i seee what you mean about the han dnot holding the weapon well..

but his kinda ment to be simple and tiny handed but i shall try changing the things you sugessted and see what it looks like.

maybe i need something in the background too ?

Cute artwork. This would make a great kids shirt.



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Changed the hand so it looks like its holding the weapon properly..

should i put a background in..

i was thinking hamster cage but then that doesnt look ninjaery

hahaha i always thought hamsters where suspect,

i want to see him dueling another hamster, because this doesn't have a story you should create one, if you actualy look at most of the tees that are submitted they have a story, well... all the brilliant ones, a simplistic story but good one,

your right..

i completely see what you mean i shall try adding in some other character thanks

How about the eyes were positioned in the center of the eye this avoids another character ?

thats i good idea

You should give him a blackbelt and maybe a katana instead this mace looking thins looks like its gonna be his distruction ^^

I love this little guy, he makes me smile :) I agree with the "creating a story" comment....I love all of your designs, but that seems to be the one thing that is missing from all of them. Very cool style though :)

i love ur illustration they are neet and good drawn with nice color pick i just see most of ur designs maybe all u just like the character u drawn which is cool to interact and love ur character but,,!!! i never see s story and again don`t have to be story but atleast add something with this character or an object to complete it cause most of ur character dont seem to stand alone always have reaction or pose that could use extra something with them to make it pop hope i didnt confuse u~

hmmm...maybe a numckuck instead?

Great! I like it the way it is.

Is in it over 8 colors?

I think he needs a more "ninja-esque" weapon. A huge spiked ball on a string isn't what I think of when I think of ninjas!

hahah thats really cute

how about more ninja-like details?

like...



weapons

clothes

black mask

Nice one! But change the weapon to something ninja-related.

i think it would be cool to have something to show the scale of nevil. maybe a dinosaur/human foot?

It's missing something...

i say a sword or something either than that spike ball. also this is way over the 8 color limit. i'd hate to see it loose it's color though :(

wery cute..5 for you..(^-^)..

yeah, this weapon is definitely not something a true ninja would use. i say go with the chucks.

Chucks would be awesome. I love your style!

I shall try and figure this one out soon been really busy

nun chucks all the way.. character is dope.. u have a nice style.. put a hamster wheel behind him.. ha