This shirt is not for war, nor is it against it. It\'s merely stating that the cost of our freedom shouldn\'t be taken lightly.

Like it...
maybe try out some other colours?
just to see if others work

Pretty bitchin! I like the simplicity and the grunge effect. It's very cool.

Let me know what you think of mine?
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Heck dude what are you waiting for.. get this sucka printed I want one!

i like it

nice texture in the rays

I kinda feel like there should be a bit more chromatic contrast. It would give more richness to the design.

What do you mean by chromatic contrast?

This design is amazing and the message within the shirt is neat! I like how it bursts from the star, very cool. Nicely done. This needs to be printed!

Colors more on opposite sides of the color wheel -- red-green, blue-orange. But I'm not suggesting any colors.

Thanks guys for all your input.. In the next couple of days I am going to try to put this design on black with the red rays in the background.. and pink with white stars and maybe yellow rays in the background. I hopefully will have something up by Friday night. Thanks!

Sweet! Submit now (...though I definitely want to see the alternate colour versions anyway!)


Cheers for the comment on mine!

I like it. I would definetly buy it.

I think you should probably modify the drips a bit more to make them look less alike. Other than that, looks pretty cool. I like the texture running through the blue.

i would delete that stain on the right

Here is the new design update. I redid the blood splats and I also tried out some different colors. Not sure if I should leave the white outlined star on the pink or if I should make it black like the others. Any thoughts?

I really like the middle design. I think the star on the pink one is fine. Print it up!

Take a look at mine if you have some time, please?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18495/Moondial

Any other opinions?

I am going to submit this soon so I could really use some last minute feedback on this design. Thanks!

Any more thoughts?

awsome i'd buy it soon as it came out
on the red one the 2 bottom splats looked like palm trees for a second but i've also been up since 3 last night so it might be my eyes :p jusyt thought i'd let you know

Wonderful. I'd buy this.