The text bubble seems way too close to the armpit, and also having that much printed stuff right around the bottom of a tee seems a bit uncomfortable to me? You might wanna look at a different way of wrapping the bottom of this illustration, maybe just eliminate the clouds.
I understand what Auryn is saying... but maybe, instead of a different wrapping, you could make the words a little smaller. It might eliminate the word bubble floating into the armpit. Either way, it's a great design.
Marker illustration at this point, I really like the \'drawn on\' aspect of that, but it almost creates more than 8 colours. PROBLEMATIC.
Is simulated process an option? It wasn\'t mentioned in the kit, but I\'ve seen people talk about it in their submissions...