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OK now I see your MO. Two first subs???
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He is a very well drawn character, but there needs to be something going on behind/next to him to warrant the expression. Something completely out of the ordinary.
That's where my brain stops working. I'll try to think of something to suggest... |
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I love your character, but ProfessorE is right, he needs to be doing something, or there needs to be a story! This certainly has potential!
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yeah... i no your right..
i have this thing where i just draw charaters... so i need to focus more on the back grounds.. hmmmmmm what can he be doing? |
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anything else guys??
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4 days later
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i don't really see this on a shirt... or anywhere...
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how helpful thanks
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Cool character. Hmmm....perhaps you can have him sort of pulling a thread with the hand we can't see and there's a rip in the t-shirt? I don't know just making a suggestion. He has a sort of "What, I wasn't doing anything wrong" look on his face. Maybe shrink him down a bit too.
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I like him. He looks like he just stole or broke something. But a whole lot of colors for printing.
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Cool illustration, but as-is doesn't work as a shirt. Maybe add something like a tipped big-wheel in the background? Maybe a pothole as a reason for the tipped big-wheel?
Critique Mine? |
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yeah he definatly needs soemthing..
i shall work on him this weekend.. someone said i should make him into a internet geek and say internet stunts growth.. im not sure that a good idea or not but could work really well |
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How about dum dum ? funny name for this character.
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I like him, and I like your style of illustration too! Maybe he's holding up a sign or something. Like a protest? He looks pretty upset. But I like your work.
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thanx:)
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9 days later
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i love ur illustrotion line colors all is fine with me just maybe add story to it,, or make him look at a tallllllller guy maybe,,,so the story seems more obvious ok but its good keep it up ,
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haaaaaaaaaaaay lol look i see u have another critique called ark why don`t u put those 2 guys together and make one design? put that big ass guy on the right and make him look at him and maybe u got deeper idea bout it
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Cool, and yep put ARK and Midge together ;) will work well!
like your charecters! |
14 days later
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dull
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8 days later
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jayrawz on May 18 '08 have his other arm pointing to the nipple area haha.. that would be hilarious
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tell me what you think
i know idea needs work..
what else can i do ?