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love the character not sure what to do with him

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Help please

Might be kinda funny to have him looking at his right shoulder and there being a cute little bird there. With that same scared look on his face...

Crititque mine.

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WOW Man Boobs!

i like that idea..

maybe like a blank expression

I think the above suggestion with the bird would add a little something to the design. I like the illustration style!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/18346/Robots_in_Disguise

yeah i think ill try the whole bird idea thanx guys

he looks like he is going to puke on us. rad.



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well thats a ok thing i guess

maybe he looks like that, because hes has eaten to much - something strange in his belly that he swallowed accidentely - now having party in his stomach?!



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I agree with fillengroovy.. if you place a bird on the shoulder with the same look that would be hilarious and I would buy.







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Really like the character, but yeah it needs something else like the bird that Fillengroovy sugested or maybe a uber cute kitten rubbing up against his leg

OK ok... so bird is sounding the best so far.. ill rework and see what we come up with

kittten interestingggg hmmmm

Kittens are good... I like them with peanut sauce.

yeah but would be rather random him with kittens and peanut sauce all them..

hmmmmmmmmmm

use him with midge!

eating contest

cool character! :)

Maybe the lines of the boobs should not go all the way to the top, what about the half tone or its solid color?

You could make some kind of a pet on his shoulder (some funny bird could work).

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I really like your style. I can't wait to see your finished product!

that is wicked, though im not sure about the shading though, it makes him feel sort of plastic.

why the tits?