First Sub...

tell me what you think

i no its needs work

just wanted to see what you think

nothing???

nice vector

Looks pretty great! Nearly perfect



There's only two minor things I'd change (and they're more of a personal preference) -

Shrink the whole lot down a bit and move the giant bunny's head over to the right (or make his head wider to the right)



Other than that I think I'd leave it ..I would like to see the entire full-scale illustration.



Very nice clean work!



Please crit mine if you get a chance:



linky

thank you..

any other things??

are the colours wrong?

how many colors are there?



i like your style, but u do know its gonna take more than some cool characters on a shirt to win here, right? You've gotta have them doing something real clever, etc. check out winners like fatheed for example, who has a really clean style and wins because of his ideas (very well executed, obvi).

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there are too many colours,there should be up to 8 colours

(including shades,black & white)