Anything you guys can suggest before I touch up and submit?

Work on the blood splatter a bit. There are some nice vector splatters that you can find on the internet (for free!) that could be used to touch it up a bit.

Yeah, I was going to do that, but I'm an old school artist and literally create everything you see myself with the "paint brush" on photoshop. But the splatter effect is just too hard to simulate by "hand". I also keep seeing the same splatter/drip effects over and over on here.

Don't know why this posted like three times but whatever. Leave comments thanks.

Threadless or my internet is being weird, so here it is. Thanks for comments.

The head is smashed now...

I don't know if it needs the type. It seems obvious that he has been shot in the head, so is that redundant? I dunno..... Maybe fill the hole with black? I love Zombies...can't wait for RE5!!!!!

Keep the head somewhere in between V1 and V2 lengthwise, it's too short here. Pretty badass, but wheskey is right that you should make the bullethole more noticeable, I think.

A small comment: I think the type could be a bit more energetic by breaking up the baseline. Bounce the type around some. It'll match the explosiveness of the head shot.

Yeah I don't know where the black hole from the first design went. It was there before. In addition to moving type off baseline, should it be bigger and/or red?

I dunno, I like the green and the size.

I think you should lengthen the head to be the size it was in the original.



Keep the type, but maybe make it a bit more dynamic, maybe have it interact with the rest of the design a bit more.



Nice splatters though.

scarry



not sure about the subject matter, might invite violence?

That kind of green on black t-shirt does a disturbing effect to me. Maybe it's what you are looking for.

I would try to lower or fade the colors.

I hope my english is not so bad...

Keep thinking there should be a trickle of blood coming from the bullet hole.



oh and glow ink on the eyes

I think the concept needs some work to it, like a twist or something to make it funny or interesting, since right now it's pretty much just a bloody head on a tee. The art as it stands isn't bad, but yeah I just think it needs a little more WHAM! to make people want to spend the $15-20. Just my two cents =)

Great feedback guys. The idea behind this is, in like 95% of all Zombie movies they say the words "shoot them in the head" I'm a huge zombie movie fan and to me it's like a fanboy shirt for zombie movies. Any more suggestions to feed that idea?

what's te yellow thing under the head?

agree with olie! that's the concept needs more work.

So yeah, made it a teamsters shirt with NIght Of The Living Dead font and reference for street cred, filled hole and un-squished head. But just realized I didn't bounce the text a bit. Thanks for your comments they are making this shirt start to come together!

Possibly put the "Zombie Hunter" stuff on the back and move "shoot them in the head" under the image? Also, I would consider changing the text to "Aim for the head" but that's just a personal preference, I think.



putting one on the front and one on the back and get rid of the boxes? Also, maybe try some other colors on other shirts?



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Disregard the second chunk of that, it was a copy/paste mishap.

I like it and I do agree the text at the top needs tinkering. Maybe a bit bigger and bolder and more stylised to suit, I say leave the bottom text as it is.

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