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v1 La Revolution Robotique, current version








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omnig33k
omnig33k on Apr 08 '08
Off with her head!
omnig33k
omnig33k on Apr 08 '08
Any opinions at all?
xbigjohnson
xbigjohnson on Apr 09 '08
this is cool i like the art work...and thanks for the feed back on my shirt
mabortdrummer
mabortdrummer on Apr 09 '08
I like the placement of this alot.. it really seems to flow across the shirt. Great design!
Jonathan86
Jonathan86 on Apr 09 '08
is it supposed to be a portrait? I'm not reading what the borders around her are
omnig33k
omnig33k on Apr 09 '08
Ah. It is a wig mannequin's head in a cardboard box lined with silk. I don't know what she used to "do" exactly, but there was a series of wires coming out of her neck. We found her at an antique sale and took her picture.

I could edit the box itself out of the shirt design, though, if that would improve it.



Also, I was thinking of removing the two tendrils of curls because it isn't clear that they're hair.
chris.pomar
chris.pomar on Apr 09 '08
i know it is from a photo, but maybe you should add in some other dismembered limbs and such, loosely connected by wires. its really difficult to make out the wires, it looks more like a crooked bust. good otherwise.



any opinions ? wolf & rabbits
Starmazing
Starmazing on Apr 10 '08
Yeah there are some clarity issues with everything that is not the bust. Thicken the wires and maybe erase the box and silk. Also think about cleaning up the shading in the bust. It's really creepy in a very good way.
stejahen
stejahen on Apr 10 '08
Hmm, I too think clarity is the main issue. Great image and placement though.
bobobob1230
bobobob1230 on Apr 12 '08
this is really cool. i prob wouldn't wear but w.e



I implore you, in the name of humanity, crit, lads, crit!

bobobob1230
bobobob1230 on Apr 12 '08
def better on blue
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