I erased my old critique by accident. Anyway here is the updated version if anyone remembers the old one. I know it needs more work, but I wouldn\'t mind some feedback and if anyone has some tips on making the bowl look more like glass, let me know.

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Great anyone else?

Ok, I'll take it on. First off I had to read the title to get what was going on. Second how many colors are you using? The feces(?) is too close to the same color as the fish and not enough contrast. Last bug the eyes a little more. I'm not sure the concept is strong enough but that's for the people to decide. cool art though.



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Right now it's 7 colors. The lighter poo is the same color as the regular poo, except it is at 50% opacity. I don't know that bugging the eyes out is what you do when you are doing what the fish is doing, more likely you strain and close your eyes, but I'm willing to

get other oppinions.

Shink starmazing means make the eyes bigger but keep them strained.



Make the blocks fatter so they are the same proportions as Tetris.



The bowl highlighs need redoing. The bowl might be better without perspective also I think.

Yeah I get the eye thing.



I agree on the highlights, I was struggling with the look of the glass.



As far as the blocks being fatter, it should look more like poop

then tetris blocks. I struggled with this part too. If I make them bigger I need to make the fish bigger, also they end up looking more like tetris and less like fish poop



Not sure that I agree that the bowl would look better without perspective, but I can check it out.

YES! I love it!



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Just thinking the blocks to be a little fatter but still rounded. Fish is already big enough. What about lining up the dropping poo with the empty slot?

"What about lining up the dropping poo with the empty slot?"



Yes, I was meaning to do that, good call.