in case of heart attack.... place pads here, and here....

Haha, I quite like the idea, but it's a bad choice of typeface to use. Do it like actual instructions - so use Helvetica/Arial and it'll be ready.

changed the font.... any other comments to improve? :-)

Could align the text to fill out the same length as the illustration.



Like this:



{_______________}

in case of heart attack

instead of?



{_________________}

in case of heart attack

made the text fill the illustration width....



any other comments / suggestions?

they're more than welcome :-)

Very interesting idea. Maybe put a shadow under the zipper so it looks more 3D, but overall this is a cool idea.



Critique mine?

are they not in the wrong place?

nope, right on the spot according to several AED websites.

ok, what do you think...?

changed the zipper thing, and added some other color to the zippable area...



any good? let me know

Very nice! Submit!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/18181/Six_Monkeys, if you've the time.

Indeed!

But shouldn't be there text at both areas on the shirt? "place pad here"

well, i think i like it better when there's only one text place.

otherwise it's just a copy of the same pad area with the same text



any other suggestions to improve the design?

ready to sub?

looks great. i wouldnt use this shirt color though - it needs to be a little more contrasty for the image. critique mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/18323/when_i_grow_up_i_wanna_be_a_designer

you mean, a green shirt, with yellow pad areas for instance?

i could try some different colors indeed....

good point from cyberInk, to show more color options...

what do you think?



other (color) suggestions?

to chlobo107:



wikipedia says: "place pads here"

Haha, Good to see different shirt colors

I like the blue and the grey one.

It would look a bit too much like a patchwork tshirt from a distance for my liking... But still, love the knowledge of where to fribrilate guys.

go for the sub with these colors?

maybe i open the zipper a bit in one corner, to get rid of the patchwork-idea of JervV..

maybe you could add the heart wave lines on the back of the shirt - just an idea to underline the concept - but dont know if its needed.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/18372/Who_is_the_math_genius

i think i should change the different colors back to one tshirt color at the time. therefore it'll look more that it's part of a regular tshirt instead of a colored patchwork thing..... and opening a small corner of the zipper area will help as well.....

ok, new version.

colors are now back to one shirtcolor-range, and added logo & txt "...AND HERE"



also opened the zipper a bit... hope it doesn't look like a patchwork anymore :-)



improvement? let me know.

(color) suggestions are welcome

Good to see that the colors and the zipper have changed.

I like all three!

TONS impovement from the first... i like it!!!

The choice to stick with similar colours looks like the best direction. The little "heart shock" logo is also a good addition. I can't see anything that would need to be changed.



Light Discrimination

Don't forget the razors, in case of hairy chest! ;)

awesome. maybe put that pulse thing going up side, back, belt?





http://www.threadless.com/critique/18547/Hypotemoose

Ha! I like!



Mind giving another critique?

Best so far.

I love this!

hooray! it's up in the sublist



go and have a vote :-)