I made this a while ago, and forgot all about it. Don\'t feel it\'s ready, but I\'m not sure what step to take next. Any suggestions?

loose the text for a start - maybe replace the flowery things with heat waves - love the sun

Definately an improvement!



Not sure what the reflection adds though? Love the elephants. They remind me of an old cartoon here in the UK called Mr Ben.



I've worked on mine... wanna crit them?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17940/Mild_Mannered_Reporter

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17860/Size_matters

Really cute! I agree, I think your graphic would be stronger if you took the reflection out- I tend to look more at it than the great illustration above it.