My very first design concept here!



If you lot like the concept I\'ll tidy it up in the next version.



5 unique colours.



Critique away - its ok u can be very harsh if need be - i can take it - thanks :-)

This is very nice. I would like it on a gold-colored T-shirt.



And I think the design should be smaller to make it look like a handy gadget.

eh?

oh now I get it......I like the idea

yeah make it smaller

alright - trying gold with a smaller (like a heart pacer sort of)



And had an idea that it might work well as a wraparound with the panel on the back.



Thoughts?

The smaller one looks good. I think you may center it to the tee, so the pipe thingy goes right to the heart (if that's what is intented).



Any cool design on the back is cool with me. The wrap-around one is nice too. Maybe you can play with the tee colors.

cool! i like the smaller, but not the color...

critique mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/17891/men_after_all

already did :-)

alright revised version - look at v2 also. Really not sure what to think of this concept myself actually. Some may love it tho.

I don't know that I would immediately think that this was a solar panel. Also when I think about solar panels on clothes I immediately think about that one episode of project runway (you know what I'm talking about) where they sewed shiny patches onto potato sacks and called the clothes "green" because they had fake solar panels and were made out of junk. Problem is solar panels just don't look very good and junk doesn't look very good (I'm still ranting about project runway). And they were just stupid silver patches that didn't do anything! What a stupid episode...

Anyway I see the concept here, and I recognize that it's different from what they were doing on project runway but I still don't think that solar panels look all that interesting. Now if it were a functional solar panel connected to a pacemaker... That would be a different story.

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nah - don't no it - don't watch hardly any tv. I agree solar panels are ugly - might go away and have a think about how i can change the concept - cheers.