Just a design my girlfriend\'s been asking me to make for a while. I used to print my own shirts, but I don\'t have the time anymore, so hopefully this design gets picked up!

hey guys, I'd appreciate a few comments, especially from the folks who think I shouldn't submit it. It'd be cool to know why exactly you feel that way. :)

what about having him at the helm (taps) of a bathtub with a pirate flag.

that's a cool idea. I'll try to work that in when I have more time.

Also I think you could add some of the grey to the black parts to show highlights. It looks a little flat on the black.

yeah that makes sense.

cute

Updated, thanks to some of the comments. Lemme know what you guys think.

Cute; like it.

nice - the bathtub worked out well. Shadow under the tub, or maybe a puddle of split water. Not sure about the flag hoing behind the shower head.

yeah frankly I wasn't sure what to do about the flag and shower head. Maybe just keep the flag in front? Or have a longer shower head and the flag at slightly half mast...something to think about.

Great. I think you should keep the flag behind the shower head, as putting it in front will make the shower head harder to get.
If you were to add to it, you could try if a few water drops work? If not, I think this is ready to submit!

Last update. Took a week but been busy with work so this is the soonest I could get to it. Hope you guys like it!

That, is cute!
I wouldn't make this very huge though.
Critique mine ?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/18560/Mom

Smaller and top color tee (dark blue). Very cute!

http://www.threadless.com/profile/727302/NJz_Kollectionz/critiques