i try create chilrden draw feel.. hope it work.. ^^,

I don't know if the pieces of chalk are really adding to the picture. My eyes seem to be pulled up to the yellow stick and it's distracting me from the two silhouettes.

Nonetheless, it's a nice piece of work.

The style is cool but not appealing enough to desire...



I agree with chanasaur about the chalk.

thanks ^^ hmm... without the chalk will so boring... if i put the chalk under the art wil better? i hope keep the concept... any other way?

Maybe if you made it with the perspective of looking over a child's shoulder who's doing the drawing?

great colours... think this could do with a little bit more detail

it's not work....haha~

but i like the color *_______________*

Put the chalk under the art, and put more chalk will be better.

I agreed w/Raid. The colors look awesome on the Dakota Slate. I'd make the figures more refined.

Colors very nice

thanks for all ^^, i will put version2 soon.. the figures and building should more detail i agree.. and color remain ya ^^

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great illustration, so fresh ... But it don't look like the drawn by a child. try to draw the left hand ( if you are not a left-hander).
Although I like it like it is

I agree with the first two, lose the chalk. I like the subtle sense of industrial doom. Not sure if that was something you meant for the piece to convey but I enjoy it...


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well 31 people say need more work, so think you get the idea xD

honestly i like the art itsnot easy to make shapes on that kind of style, so good luck on the next V :D

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