This one is a little weird. The concept or message is hard to tell what you're trying to get across. work with it more? I may be copletely missing it here, but I don't see what is happening.

The concept is secondary to the design on this one. Don't think about it. Just look at it.

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I actually really like this. I do agree that the concept is hard to tell.

Well there really isn't much of a concept. It was made to look groovy, and then the title sort of just fell into place.

It's cute. If you are happy with the art go for it. I just am not a fan of the line-work. Keep up the good work.

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What about the linework bothers you?

Actually linework rocks, hehe! :)