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need help with the name!
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any suggestions?
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Zadajin on Mar 28 '08
I think it is a interesting idea, but maybe it needs to be approached from a different angle. What if they didn't like the mustache instead?
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_susan_lee_ on Mar 28 '08
i like
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why wouldn't they like the mustache? everyone loves a mustache
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name suggestions?!
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tiniknox on Mar 29 '08
Would love to see some color. Really cute idea.
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mustache is being welcomed
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Starmazing on Mar 29 '08
Yeah not so sure what you are going for. It's interesting to look at but completely ignorable. Maybe color would help and mustache needs to be more recognizable as a mustache could be a lip. Keep tweaking it!
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ofthecoast on Mar 29 '08
call it making faces!
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starmazing, this is jut the outline view. its not finished at all, just a wip right now.
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more coloring and texturing..
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i think im going with the suggestion for the name "nose warming party"
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Birdle Schwilby on Mar 29 '08
love it! and my friend thinks the eyebrows look like turds, not that theres anything wrong with turds with legs, everybody likes a good turd!
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Work on the texturing of the hair for sure, they do look like turds. Besides that I really like the surreal idea and illustration :)
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yep, little poops for sure. i knew people would say that right now. i'm going to add curls that come out of the shape to give it make them look more hairy (hairy poops?)
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new one coming soon, i lost the legs!
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added more textures to the hairy ones
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i added lots of things, including a background! what do you think?
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Get some more contrast in there between the different face pieces. I really think this could benefit from a less realistic color scheme. Also, define some of those strokes a bit more. Make 'em thicker and tapered. I think its a good idea but its not quite there yet.
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nomixedcoinsplease on Apr 01 '08
may the eyes should not look to tired/ sad... the mouth could be more man-line its quite feminine - but the idea is really cool
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Spross on Apr 01 '08
I have to agree that version 4 was definitely headed in the right direction. The current version's low key color isn't working with the background and it really doesn't make sense without the legs.
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I am also pro-legs.
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redo-ing it a bit
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oops, forgot to make mr. mustache smaller.
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definitely a step in the right direction.
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cool, thanks
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added some color!
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okay, im working on finding the right texture for that guy
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added more textures. sheesh
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looking really good, no suggestions, just wanna see where you get with this
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element_101 on Apr 10 '08
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im gonna go with this as a final
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his nose is so happy
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keithcw on Apr 11 '08
Huzzah!
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presentation rocks
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haha, thank you
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