need help with the name!

any suggestions?

I think it is a interesting idea, but maybe it needs to be approached from a different angle. What if they didn't like the mustache instead?

i like

why wouldn't they like the mustache? everyone loves a mustache

name suggestions?!

Would love to see some color. Really cute idea.

mustache is being welcomed

Yeah not so sure what you are going for. It's interesting to look at but completely ignorable. Maybe color would help and mustache needs to be more recognizable as a mustache could be a lip. Keep tweaking it!







critique me

call it making faces!

starmazing, this is jut the outline view. its not finished at all, just a wip right now.

more coloring and texturing..

i think im going with the suggestion for the name "nose warming party"

love it! and my friend thinks the eyebrows look like turds, not that theres anything wrong with turds with legs, everybody likes a good turd!

Work on the texturing of the hair for sure, they do look like turds. Besides that I really like the surreal idea and illustration :)

yep, little poops for sure. i knew people would say that right now. i'm going to add curls that come out of the shape to give it make them look more hairy (hairy poops?)

new one coming soon, i lost the legs!

added more textures to the hairy ones

i added lots of things, including a background! what do you think?

Get some more contrast in there between the different face pieces. I really think this could benefit from a less realistic color scheme. Also, define some of those strokes a bit more. Make 'em thicker and tapered. I think its a good idea but its not quite there yet.

may the eyes should not look to tired/ sad... the mouth could be more man-line its quite feminine - but the idea is really cool



http://www.threadless.com/critique/17129/shadow_talk

I have to agree that version 4 was definitely headed in the right direction. The current version's low key color isn't working with the background and it really doesn't make sense without the legs.

I am also pro-legs.

redo-ing it a bit

oops, forgot to make mr. mustache smaller.



this critique is getting long! sheesh.

definitely a step in the right direction.

cool, thanks

added some color!

okay, im working on finding the right texture for that guy

added more textures. sheesh

looking really good, no suggestions, just wanna see where you get with this

cool. you should probably submit it soon. not much else you can do to it...



wanna check mine out?

im gonna go with this as a final

his nose is so happy

Huzzah!

presentation rocks

haha, thank you