Im done as far as i can see but I thought I would run it through critiques first.

Is the presentation ok? I can\'t scale down the actual design to be on the shirt because it just doesnt read well that small, so im hoping the silhouette will work..

submit this!!! i liked your first version that you submitted but i LOVE this one!!! this is great!!

oo, i see you fixed the two tail problem, very nice!

thanks..

presentation ok?

title ok?

this is a great use of one colour :) go for it!

maybe the cat on shirt also just blue because it might attract the attention away from the main design. or outlined?

I see what you mean about it getting smushed if you make it smaller. Fancy flash presentation? oooo, i just thought of a title possibility.. Felines

eh, get it? lol

isaboa just had the same suggestion in the blogs.. I think I will be using that..

FeLINES.

as far as just showing blue.. I want to leave the option open for other colors.. because any color will work, so i thought the gradients for the silo would be good.. I dont think it takes away that much from the design.. does it?

I love this way more than Hair Kitty Kitty, really nice job you're improving at a fast rate =)

The style of these are awesome. Maybe in the future go for some other types of animals thrown in? They feel a little too cat obsessive; reminds me of people who own like 10 cats.

If you own 10 cats, nothing personal =p.

lol.. I own 3..

Im gonna upload a new version in a minute

just a silo outline on the shirt

looks good to me!

It reminds me too much of the last one with the creepy girl.

Its a resub rampant

Ah, that could be why. Working on one of those myself. I have to say I like this one a lot better.

Something with the top cats cheek/eye area seems off to me. It appears it is curving inward instead of outward. Also not a big fan of the dark tee, and I would love to see the gradient of the critiques of the other return to this.

That is terrifying, in an awesome way, though. The new presentation is a great idea. Submit!

If you have a sec to look at my design, I'd appreciate it very much.

rampant, thats the angle.. of the head.. I can't do the same to that right side as the left, the contours would be off.

lindsey.. terrifying? you aren't saying this is creepy are you? This is not supposed to be.

just letting you know

letting me know what?

that the cat has a caved in cheek.

Ohh, can you make the bottom sitting cat have ears?

he does

If you could somehow make these Circus Kitties, I think you would definitely have a winner. I love all the line detail!

It's not like horror film creepy, it's just that swarms of anything make me nervous; it's a personal bias with cats, too - I like them, but just know they're plotting against me ;-) Honestly I like the design a lot and don't think fear would be the standard response!

I'm talking about the bottom left cat, the one that's sitting. If he has ears then they are terribly hard to see, I think it has to do iwth the conture coming off the sleepy cat.

yeah. I dont think there is much I can do about that rampant.

I like this a lot. Even though cats suck :P

Critique Mine?

just playing around with presentation options.

FYI I just subbed this..

feLINES

intricacy and placement are both brilliant. really nice.

your design seems to me delicious

I believe that bobba is similar to the floaters to fish

gracias

Thanks, yes this is up for voting

http://www.threadless.com/submission/157462/feLINES

and yes a bobber is a floating object some people use for fishing

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