Still some things i have to fix but just wanted to see what people thought of the design thus far. I'm not used to doing this type of hand-drawn style, so i'm not sure if i've pulled it off. comments and suggestions welcome :)

Clever and awesome. Perhaps the right ear should be outlined to match the rest? That's really all I can come up with, wow.



If you have a sec to look at mine, it'd mean a lot to me:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17339/Proud_That_You_re_A_Self_Made_Man

Thanks, yeah i noticed the right ear after i uploaded it. That will definitely have to be fixed

Nice. The concept is cute and the colors match.

i like a lot

ooh, i like

morning bump.

bump

i think i'd like it better on a different shirt color. like the light blue to look like a sky. and you could drop a color from the design that way too.

i think i'd like it better on a different shirt color. like the light blue to look like a sky. and you could drop a color from the design that way too.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/15876/world_peas

cleaned up the design a little and changed up the colours and shirt colour.

Yes! this is awesome! super cleaver concept, and excellent drawing :D

bump

oooh i love this one!!!

i would definetely wear it =)

really good drawing



http://www.threadless.com/critique/17761/Who_needs_wings

It's def cute. Good work. The style is well done and the concept works. Let the people vote!



check mine out

Thanks everyone for the comments

oh no please don't add highlights.





i really like how graphic it is and i can't suggest any changes apart from things you might want to experiment with, by which i mean, these things might neither improve nor make this illustration worse.



it would be neat to see how this works without the black outline, or with the outline as a softer colour.

Oh I like it!

Ginette, i had tried it without the black outline before i uploaded this version and it didn't look that great. thanks for the comments though :)

Much improved :)

very clever!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/17847/angry_tv

very clever!







Critique Mine?

thanks everyone, for the kind words, i think i'm going to submit this version :)

I love the character.



Why am I thinking I want to see a green bow tie though?



just me? yeah ignore me.



critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17860/Size_matters

I think I would buy it ! submit this!







http://www.threadless.com/critique/17867/No_title_V2

i love your style!

love it, submit.

It's an uplifting shirt !

(:



critique mine?

i agree with trying a softer outline, and the black outline lmost seems too thick to me, but i like it a lot





http://www.threadless.com/critique/19994/French_Fry

Love it $5.





http://www.threadless.com/critique/19361/Hypno_vision

like a take off of the type tee?

submit and see what happens

hold up

353 days?!

nvm