maybe could turn into something, maybe not! tell me what you think everyone!! i appreciate the feedback!!

It's fun. I think it is almost as if he were playing air guitar. If you changed the fingers on his left hand to reflect that I think it would be better.

das cool as hell!

this is a lame idea but like what if the laces of the shoe or the outline was a bright reddish color? maybe its just me but i love designs like this that are all one color mainly and then one random related part is a bright color.

thanks maltz. i'll play around with that and see how it looks!! not sure if i'll post a new version tonight but i'll definitely post something along that line!!

i see what you are saying deadhippo. i might play with that but i kind of wanted him to look like a terrible dancer more than a air guitarist. but hey!! people can see whatever they want!!

love the no-eyes

don't listen to me anymore...but...like

what if you did something with the thread coming off the shirt...like the thread unraveling around the shirt itself?

i dunno. YOU HAVE TEH SHIELD!

Simple and cool. I really like it.

I like your style:)

good use of movement

I don't know that he looks like a bad dancer, i think he looks like he's falling over backwards laughing and pointing at someone??

i changed the arms on this one. they were really stubby in the first version and looked so awkward.

this version is inspired by maltz's suggestion about adding a color. it's not quite what he was getting at but i didn't quite like how just having one are colored looked and i thought the gradient might be a good solution.

goodnight!

ohhh i meant just the laces red, or like the shoe outline with red brush.... i think 1nk is best probably....oh well

look forward to this!

thanks for the input maltz. i haven't subbed it yet. i'm going to let it marinade a little while. like until i get off work today. i'm back and forth but i do like the simplicity of 1nk for sure.

Maybe rotate it a bit clockwise, so it looks more like he is dancing. Right now he looks like he is just falling. That will place his head more on the collarbone and get it out of the armpit.

nice one -i'd buy that :-P

MIR!

I really like your style :)




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I like the illustration, but not on this colour tee.

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yeeeeeeee...cool

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I like your character! I could imagine a whole bunch of them on a shirt, all severely rhythmically challenged in their own unique way.

i think this is it!! thanks for all the input everyone!!

some additional color options although blue is my favorite ;)

I think he needs to be smaller and have some eyeballs maybe..
i like the fact you made his arms longer. Might have a bit more attitude if you could change his eyebrows?

I like it, I want one now.

lookes good. try the eyeballs - but it works without. just both feet look like the same (2 left feet) but this fits the "not dancing thing". thats anything i can think of - but its great.

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Nice design! I think its fine as is..

I really don't like how his shirt keeps on going after his shoulders.
Do ya know what I mean?

And I would try eyes because he looks mental without them... but then again maybe thats what your going for!

But nice piece! :D