this is AMAZING, way to make a double entendre:) lol the expressions are priceless. the only issue i have is with the placement - its a little small so it makes the rest of the shirt look slightly empty. is there some way that you can expand it breadthwise (up and down) to fill up some of that area? otherwise it would be perfect.



if you have some time, please score and comment on my submission… thanks!!!:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/156065/Escher_s_Mess_elation

Absolutely awesome, submit!



Critique Mine?

LAWLZ! That is so funny. SUBMIT SUBMIT!

nicely done but i gotta warn you is been done quite a few times, so expect comments on that, it hasnt been printed yet and this is the nicest looking ive seen so far so theres no harm in submitting =)

* i think it hasnt been printed

I agree that it is great and yet is a little small on the shirt. What if you moved the bread guy that is on the far left and brought him to the right and a little lower than the other two? That way you could make the design a lot larger on the shirt.



Does that make sense?

I think its great, but I agree in the fact that it should extend move vertically, its pretty long horizontally. Aside from that I love it.

Little too small, but it's a hilarious idea.

Looking better.

Definitely better. I don't know what else you could do to it.

hehe, it looks great already. However you could improve this by adding some other kitchen attributes (sink, cups, the jelly jar, other appliances, or even a counter top edge). I got the impression that they were on the floor. I'll be looking for this one later! cheers

best version by far. Maybe a little jam pot next to the toaster? or you could also make the power plug have an expression? It's fine as is though.

would love to get your crit on my submission: http://www.threadless.com/critique/17374/Knit_me_a_dream

i like the second version better than the third. I like the colors on the 2nd one and overall design shape better than the 'bread slice' outline. the subject is clever and funny.

I honestly prefer the first version.

Looking good, this version with the colors from v2!

2nd or 1st... not third!

designs a little big, is that jam / blood? love it!!

Having the entire piece made into a piece of toast is very unnecessary. The 2nd version worked much better. This shirt is already a good candidate to be printed. Just submit it already.

agree with bocefus. The 2nd version is better.

First off, I'd just like to thank everyone who commented and helped with the development of this design. I've fixed up the second version along with some additions of the cupboards showing at the bottom, to help with the illusion of this being on a kitchen counter as opposed to the floor. Feel free to continue to make helpful comments. Thank you again!

Me like! I don't know why but Sweeney Todd came to mind when i looked at this. I'd buy it!



Check out mine



http://www.threadless.com/critique/17743/Um_I_Think_I_Need_to_See_the_Chef

Yea, this is definitely the best version. Go for it!

Good critiques!

submit this!! i like it its really really good.

i like it, reminds me of the gingerbread man for some reason. i really like it though.

I didn't read the bottom thing as a cupboard right away. Highlights/Shadows on the handles could improve that. I hope I'm not too late to help.

I really like your design, but I assume you rwalise that its kinda been done and printed already? (although yours is better!)

You can see it here...

http://www.threadless.com/product/254/We_re_Toast

Thaz great!

It's much much better than the already printed one!

Yes, I like your design a lot better. I think if you put lines on the counter to look like tile, it would be perfect.

I agree its much better but I don't think threadless will print 2 similar tees. thats why I didn't submit my 'Calling Home' design.

It looks good, I like the toaster's evil glare.



You should give me some advice on mine



http://www.threadless.com/critique/17846/Skiing_Evolution

I like but the first version

I love this!!

I absolutely love this Illustration. Can't say that I would buy it personally, but I think it would sell for sure. Good job. You should make it into an animated short! ;)

something that is catching my eye is the tiles in the background are not all the same, some are not even perfect squares. Good design!

too bad it has been made before...

but I like yours more

*done

i love the design. spot on!

check out my design?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18323/when_i_grow_up_i_wanna_be_a_designer

Great work. Made me laugh so job well done. I think it's ready for submition.



PS. Please return the crit.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18325/My_Hero

This image is up guys, vote for it for reals!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/157713/The_Bad_Little_Toaster/showmore,designs

Awesome! I use to watch this movie all the time! Great illustration!



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