I'm liking how this is turning out, still has a few things left to tweak. I plan on having some sort of swoosh lines coming from the bank to the flying pig and maybe a couple clouds as well. Just wanted to get some outside opinions on what i have so far. Thanks :)

ok, first of all, the pig's shadow is afectig both the surface where the pig's standin' and the pieces of it.

Second, the broken pieces don't look like something very solid, make them with sharper angles.

Also, pigs have ears, so dont forget those, and make the wings of the flying pig a bit more towards the center of it's back, right now they look like they are it's ears.



Keep it up!

Thanks Gomez, some really good advice... I knew about the shadow and had actually already fixed it but uploaded the wrong file. The pigs wings on the other hand... it's weird how sometimes you can be so close to a drawing you don't notice the most obvious stuff. They definitely looked like ears. Thanks again.

LOL Cool stuff. Ditto on the pig's shadow affecting the piece of the broken pig. The pig bottom lip is pointy and I think the black outline could be smoother. Vector this in illustrator and I think you'd be good to go. Awesome t-shirt idea!

lol great idea but something looks a little weird about the shadow over the broken pieces and maybe the pig with wings should look exactly like the other one but overall i like it alot =)

and in case u get a chance please critique this design it's my first and anything will help thanks

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17550/Bad_Milk

Version 2, cleaned it up a little, fixed the shadow, added ears to the flying pig, and added some clouds and a direction line coming from the broken pig.

I dig it. Not sure I would wear it but that's because I wear exclusively black, red and olive color shirts. I would submit it.



check out my newest please. http://www.threadless.com/critique/17696/He_made_me_do_it

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i agree i think its ready to be submitted i like it =)

I like your unique illustration/typographic style. what is your email/web? Email a quick message at andy@ripplejunction.com when you get a chance cause I would like to see more of your illustrations.

I like it a lot, but I think maybe add ears on the broken piggy bank. the head seems a bit awkward without them.

Really Cute! Submit it!

I would definetly wear this.