v1 YOUR EMAIL HAS BEEN SELECTED!!!, current version








Work in progress by:
Joelnz
on Mar 26 '08
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Joelnz
   Joelnz on Mar 26 '08
any feedback?
Joelnz
   Joelnz on Mar 26 '08
eh?
SteveOramA
SteveOramA on Mar 26 '08
kinda funny.
maybe... no arms.
darker blue outline instead of black.
Joelnz
   Joelnz on Mar 26 '08
but don't the arms add to the excitement?
Joelnz
   Joelnz on Mar 26 '08
Any more feedback? Yay? Nay?
Curi0
Curi0 on Mar 26 '08
hahaha god those things are irritating but...yea. No arms. And theres a 1 instead of another exclamation point
MediaMisfit
MediaMisfit on Mar 26 '08
I thought the 1 was intended and I like it. Reading the title and then looking at the sample I got it and it was funny but without the title I probably would have been like WTF?
EricDiaz
EricDiaz on Mar 26 '08
keep the arms! Just fill them in with gray. More details in the computer like ventilation lines on the side of the monitor or a few buttons on the tower and maybe even a mouse.
Joelnz
   Joelnz on Mar 28 '08
any more suggestions on how i can improve this? I don't think i like it anymore
projekct
projekct on Mar 28 '08
keys for the keyboard. Maybe a digital looking envelope behind the text?
Joelnz
   Joelnz on Mar 28 '08
yea, that would be good. I don't know if my ideas really that great though
purty707
purty707 on Mar 28 '08
nice

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17642/deep

any comments would be awesome
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