The little gosling couldn\'t shake off the feeling that the game was somehow rigged...

points to improve:

1. make the crosshairs thicker

2. The ducklings in the front also need tails

good suggestions, thanks!

I actually think you can drop the crosshair all together... I understand why it's there, but it may be a little unnecessary. and i think the perspective of the gosling needs changed a bit.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/17438/cat_toys

hmm...so do people like the crosshair or is it overkill? I thought it would be funny, and make the whole design a little less "cutsy", but I can definitely take it out.

I love the idea. Hilarious! Maybe a few less elements. Since th name of the game is Duck Duck Goose maybe just 2 ducks and a goose at the end.



I think the side few communicates the best.

FYI- I laughed when I saw the cross hair so perhaps you communicate it on in a different way.

Thanks for the comments, MediaMisfit. Does anyone else think I should simplify the design by removing some of the ducklings?

I think the number of ducks is okay, but the crosshair detracts from the design.



Critique Mine?

i think that the blue shirt is really bright. i would pick a subtler color to make the ducks stand out i agree the ducklings in front need tails and the crosshair should be smaller and maybe red instead of green

new and slightly improved...

I like it. But something isn't quite right with the 4th and 8th ducks (going clockwise from the goose). They kinda look like they are falling over.

Thanks jalinfein!



Choc tpot--good eye! I think you're right about those ducklings...I'll fix them for the next version.



Any more suggestions?

the gun sight isn't exactly symmetrical. Unless that was what you were going for?

Looks much better. Everything looks opaque except the aiming circle. I don't like how it looks semi-transparent. otherwise the design looks good.

A few tweaks: I fixed those two ducklings and fixed the asymmetry in the gun sight as well as the opacity. My other idea with the gun sight was to make it much subtler with a metallic clear ink instead of red. Any thoughts?

Wow. I like it how it is. What an improvement!

Thanks, babyghost!



Any more comments? Especially on the red versus metallic clear gun sight?

this is really nice. I think it's ready as well.



Please check out mine

Thanks for the comments, everyone. Think I'll submit this one tomorrow.



I was thinking of changing the name though...does "duck, duck, goose" seem too obvious? Or is it necessary to understand the image?

ahah very nice

I would work more on the gun sight, but it's working good ;)

hmm...any specific suggestions for the gun sight?

i would wear it. like totally.

lets just hope if it winzz it comes out in kids sizes because i'm so short :(

This is up for voting now, please vote and comment! Thanks!





Duck, duck, goose!