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Haha I like this one! Good joke! Can't see anything I would change.



If you have got time please comment my design

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17349/A_story_about_rain

tahnks!

any feedback?

bump

weird. But not bad. I don't really know what I can critique because I don't really know what you are going for. I guess I would clean up the arrows a bit, unless you wanted to keep them sketchy for a reason. Not something I would wear, but it's interesting.

everything looks good except for the text. its an important part of the design, but its the weakest part right now.

Agre with xiv. Those arrows look super cool and I'd like it without the text at all.

I really like the perspective. My only qualm is that the coloring isn't complete - uncolored marks are present. Is it intentional? It may be stronger with solid colors.



I agree with the text comment. It feels too flat.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/16944/Human_Nature

I dont get it. Can you explain the joke?



Can you critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17385/Lieutenant_Crunch

The text needs work thicker would be mu suggestion. You might also consider using a handwritten text because of the style of your arrows.



Check out the new version!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17297/Zombie_Proof#v2

Yeah. Great. Now go to my critique.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/17288/21st_Century_Pirate

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17403/Interesting_Fact_47