Hello, this was my first submission. Submitted this on the 17th and it is still \"pending approval.\" I see designs that are put up that were submitted on the 19th tho so I\'m guessing this design isn\'t getting approved? In that case, what will make it better then? Unless I did something wrong. Don\'t think so tho. Submitted it on a shirt template and it is only 3 colors if I remember correctly. Either that or it sux too much...maybe the playing card is overplayed. But I thought it suited the subject well. I submitted a 2nd design for critique and got no feedback other than \"one submit\" so....I submitted that already.

Little description I left was that it was inspired by a movie and book I read about Jesse James and that the one gun with smoke coming out is suppose to represent Bob Ford\'s shot that killed Jesse James. Jesse is at the top and Bob at the bottom.

Oh I think I see. 19th is the date it was posted up to be able to be voted on? Nevermind :D....

awesome;)

I think this is a nice design. I do not think I would know that it was Jesse James and Robert Ford just by looking at it, but admittedly I have very little knowledge about either man so it could just be me.
It would be helpful to see a placement on the shirt. That can really make or break a design. Overall though, I think it is clever and pleasing to the eye. Nice work.

thx for the commentos. The design of this I submitted is just on the center of the shirt. It's a little different tho, the background is a rectangle but I thought it looked a little too blocky.