hahaha, this is a great idea! i wish the cloud seemed more like he was peeing his pants though! hahah, and i think the suns face and arms could use a little work. great concept, keep at it!

I love this shirt! Made me laugh, but don't you think the name should be 100% chance of rain since it shows the cloud "raining" . also the drops are too uniform... great idea though!

I think the title still makes sense cause the cloud is giving up so there will be 0% chance of rain. I see what you saying though "doctor recommended. I plan to rework the drawing and fix it up, but i just wanted to get a quick crit on the idea to see if i was on the right track. thanks guys :)

np. Your on the right track!

i laughed reall hard when i saw this. i like it alot, just the only thing i dont like is how the raindrops are..but i bet there is something else to do with those.

but again, i love it.

version 2, got rid of the rain drops and cleaned up the design a little.

Thoughts???

lol this shirt is AMAZING. definitely an improvement on version 1, now it actually looks like he's sweating from nervousness - double entendre. make the cloud bigger though, on the placement he seems a little disproportionate, you cant really see him from far away. also, can you make the orange on the sun a little more intense or bright? it might help make him stand out more.



if you have some time, please score and comment on my submission… thanks!!!:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/156065/Escher_s_Mess_elation

Wow - I thought the line work was a lot cleaner on the first one. The outline around the cloud needs a lot of attention, I think.

I see what your saying about the line work on the cloud but it isn't intended to be all the same weight. The first version was just a quick sketch to get the idea down, I'm surprised you thought that one was cleaner. I agree with you too poseidon, the cloud could be brought up a little bit in size. Thanks guys, more comments welcome.

Yeah the sun would look better a big more orange. This version looks cleaner to me. Play around with the sizing because the sun does look a little too big.

Your comments appreciated

http://threadless.com/critique/17425/Seriously

bump... anyone else with input???

Version 3, resized the cloud a bit and changed the colour of the sun.

any input????