What do you guys think?
Any advice on how to make it better?

also - is it ok using an image like that in the presentation?

no

I like the idea but its too simple... maybe if the picture had more to it... maybe some other keys just laying out there or something. plus, i woudlnt use the king kong picture, its distracting and take away from the shirt design. just use a shirt template to show where the design would be placed

Good concept, but.................. maybe visually dull? If you need the kong you must know this.

Like the concept -- dunno if it needs to be "exciting" -- I think people will get the joke and laugh without the kong.

Thanks guys for the comments!
I tried taking it from a different angle.
You think maybe I should integrate the keyboard into the shirt design, not only the presentation?

it's helpless?!
even in the first version I got some "needs work"..

ha!!! simple but clever i like it