This is just the uncolored vectored sketch of my next idea. I'll submit the colored version shortly.

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anyone?

nice idea

can't wait until you get the colored version

I'll have it up sometime tomorrow evening

Sweet idea.

What are those rods? Seems inorganic.

The bottoms of the trees look a bit odd. They look like drapes.

To seal the deal, you should have a kid skip over the stones. Without the kid, who would understand the joke?

the rods are reeds. i think thats what theyre called.

I will post the colored version after my last class

Colored Version
Hopefully I colored it right, haha

suggestions welcome

I dont like the shard edge of the bottom, and I would like to see a boy trying to cross the river, like Kojima said.

The background color is too dark. Kahki works pretty well.

Sorry, but one vote here *against* having a boy crossing the river. I think it'd be too much.

Having the t-shirt color be the water, so there's no bottom line, might solve that edge problem...

i know what I'm gonna do for the water now

If there was no boy, then what would the message be? Just some turtles lying around... No meaning...

thats what Im trying to avoid because I am horrible at drawing people. I may end up doing it just to see what it looks like

The coloring looks a little off... the background is a little dark and the top of the water looks a bit odd

please don't do the boy crossing the river though... I think it'd look better without the boy

i think the khaki will look better then

trees that grow under water have more roots to them. And it would be cuter if you have the turtle's face showing.

i dont like how it looks like the surface of the water is a sheet ofr whit and the bottome is a sheet of blue, if the land that connects them were a light blue maybe, i really like this

wow, I forgot this was even still up for critique. Yeah, I think it would look better for the land to also have the same color as the bottom. I'll see if I have time to do anything.