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El Gordo
El Gordo on Mar 18 '08
just a rough sketch, let me know what you think
adas1023
adas1023 on Mar 18 '08
its a pretty awesome drawing and everything, but i dont get it.

yeah a monkey is cool, but not that cool if you were just going to put it there on its own... maybe some development of different jokes and stuff that go with it.
El Gordo
El Gordo on Mar 18 '08
the idea behind the shirt is just a visual comment about what people consider to be precious.
El Gordo
El Gordo on Mar 19 '08
anybody else have any thoughts?
eladear
eladear on Mar 19 '08
Reminds me of the monkey in The Phantom of the Opera.



It isn't something I'd personally wear. However, why not add color and conclude the design. It is nicely drawn.
Tshirtsandprophecies
Tshirtsandprophecies on Mar 19 '08
man its funky , maybe u should invert the monkeys background in the mirror.the monkey will stand out in contrast, as opposed to it blending in now. Also i think ur story as precious possessions , i dunno dont get it, i felt being on a mirror its more a satire on humans in the rat race ..all we do is wait for some1 to crank r key and we inanimately perform r duties, clapping in the case of the monkey. haha

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sweetdee
sweetdee on Mar 26 '08
it's a great drawing. as for people getting it or not...who cares? a tshirt isn't fine art. it doesn't have to be conceptually ingenius. i would just add a little contrast to make it pop out a little
MediaMisfit
MediaMisfit on Mar 27 '08
Nice sketch. I think it would look nice in a vector format.
seventhfury
seventhfury on Mar 27 '08
I like this, definitely vectorize it and maybe splash some colors.



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