WIP for human giant loves. and old-fashioned guy making a crank call. looking for suggestions on color (i originally wanted to keep this one color, but if you think otherwise, tell me), shirt color, and text. it can be changed if you come up with something better than my bart simpson joke.

also, this is my first time working in this cross-hatched style, so any pointers you have on things to fix or to be aware of are always appreciated.

thanks!

haha

I like the green color; it ads to the old fashioned theme. great design!

The style is gorgeous!

v.2 has different font, some changes in contrasts, and fixed eyes. anything else i should change before submitting?

this might be the final version... any comments before i sub this?

i guess this means it's perfect! ;-)

I luv it. I'd give it a 5 when you submit if it were smaller on the shirt. Other than that I find it hilarious. The joke is alright but having it with an old timey guy saying it makes it so much better.

Are you submitting this under "human giant loves"? It would work!

that was the plan, yes.

ok i didnt know if it was just coincidence or not. im submitting one under human giant too! but i dunno if i am now.... lol. I havent even started it yet, i just have a sketch on paper.