eh? eh? its a vacuum cleaner, get it?

i will add colour, don't worry

I think you need to flesh this idea out more...dig the art style I don't think it needs color

I agree with above comment about not needing colored. It doesn't need the text, and it might be nice to see it inverted on a black shirt or other one color options prints? Also seeing the placement on a shirt would be nice to see :)

new version - any feed back?

bump

any one?

really good, i love the style and colors, dont think it needs that text, no real suggestions, i would just like to see it on a shirt

do you think anyone would get the joke withut the text?

well thats the issue here i think, if you take it out people might not get it, and if you leave it you might geat a lot of text-hate towards your design, i like it with or without the text, maybe just wait for more opinions about that matter