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Torakamikaze
on Feb 01 '07

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Torakamikaze on Feb 01 '07

Well folks, after many moons of retirement, Im back in the submitting world... for now. Thus, I present to you what will soon be my submission for Urbanraptor's wonderful "Brit It or Quit It" competition. Lemme know what you think!

tracerbullet on Feb 01 '07

It's looking good, but I'm not a huge fan of how the tail is all shirt color. I think at least the under side could use some shading.

Torakamikaze on Feb 01 '07

yeah, i was thinking of sticking another color in there

iPear on Feb 01 '07

You gon' git raped

Torakamikaze on Feb 01 '07

Its about time

StopPickingOnMe on Feb 01 '07

Ooohh pretty

Torakamikaze on Feb 01 '07

should I add anything? part of me wonders if its not enough

squintygirl on Feb 01 '07

AHAHAHA! I think the bowler hat is sitting a bit funny on the dino's head, but this is great.

Torakamikaze on Feb 01 '07

thanks squinty... i agree

drmtama2 on Feb 01 '07

one question... these "critique subs" are up right away or do they take the same amount of time to be up as regular subs.?

Torakamikaze on Feb 01 '07

yeah, i was confused about that to. It came up right away... even though the usual screen came up saying itll be up in 4-8 days

drmtama2 on Feb 01 '07

cool .. thxz.. Tora

martiandrivein on Feb 01 '07

it's good...kinda like ours

martiandrivein on Feb 01 '07

This one

Torakamikaze on Feb 01 '07

heh, i guess theres only so far you can go with a british trex

abeadle on Feb 01 '07

he is very proper!

J-Ray on Feb 01 '07

heheh

renfrue on Feb 01 '07

niiice,
Caleb will be happy indeed

my 2 cents: add some texture to the dino
add another color

J-Ray on Feb 01 '07

His arms are too long but I like his right wrist... it's great.

v2 T and Crumpets, 1042 days ago, click to expand

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Torakamikaze on Feb 01 '07

V2 Mothafuckas! Added a fifth color for some fun added depth, and fixed the hat so it was less awkward. How am I doin?

renfrue on Feb 01 '07

wooo

i agree, shorten the arms
he doesn't have to be drinking(he could have an extended pinky)

Torakamikaze on Feb 01 '07

hmmmm... shorter arms eh??

i suppose they should be

El_Dictador_Cubano on Feb 01 '07

hahaha soooooo much better than the other British T-Rex

Torakamikaze on Feb 01 '07

hehe, thanks

renfrue on Feb 01 '07

looking forward to V3

Svetlana on Feb 02 '07

You think you could add the super awesome ASCII picture in there somewhere??? Kidding. I think it looks great!

I had an idea of T-Rex Masterpiece Theatre, with him sitting in front of a fireplace with a big ol' book on the table.

J-Ray on Feb 02 '07

awesome, submit already!

chelly on Feb 02 '07

well, obviously it needs a monocle. and a fancy scarf (square is square). and for some reason it bothers me that there isn't another chair at that table. i almost even want the cookies to be shaped like little dinasaurs.

i like the serene look on his face and the 5th color really helped him from looking so flat.

theurbanraptor on Feb 02 '07

YESSSSSS

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Torakamikaze on Feb 02 '07

smaller armed trex?

Edword on Feb 02 '07

hell yell.

J-Ray on Feb 02 '07

Much better :) Cuz everyone knows that t-rex has tragically short arms!!! now sub!

Petanca on Feb 02 '07

Much better, I would use two shades of grey taht are a bit more different from each other for the shadows in the skin, also some shadows in the suit would be nice

canadianbeaver on Feb 02 '07

Charming!

chelly on Feb 02 '07

i demand a monacle and dinasaur shaped cookies!!! also, a non-square scarf. thank you and good night.

Torakamikaze on Feb 02 '07

petanca - good suggestions, I would add another to the skin, but Ive already reached the 5 color limit. And Ive been contemplating whether or not the suit needs more shadows. hmmm

chelly - although i enjoy your suggestions, I may not implement them here. But I will use them when creating the logo for this contest.

Outlaw01 on Feb 02 '07

I feel it needs some sort of background

Petanca on Feb 02 '07

I don't mean add a new color, I mean using a slightly lighter sahde of grey for the skin highlights.

chelly on Feb 02 '07

fuck you tora fuck you and your boring humorless cookies

*sobs*

Torakamikaze on Feb 02 '07

dont go chelly! come on kiddo, Ill make you those candied yams you love so much

Torakamikaze on Feb 02 '07

petanca - wouldnt that still be using a new color though? Another shade = another ink to be used.

Petanca on Feb 02 '07

no, that means REPLACING one color for another, sorry, I guess i can't explain myself.

Torakamikaze on Feb 02 '07

we sure are having a hard time interpreting each other. Perhaps you and I should sit down for a coffee

chelly on Feb 02 '07

(dinasaur cookies)

Torakamikaze on Feb 02 '07

ok, ill make you candied yams AND dinosaur cookies. Grab a chair

melhel86 on Feb 02 '07

I'd rather it be on the dark grey or brown tee shirt and use a more vibrant green... nice work though and a more interesting B-Rex. ha.

renfrue on Feb 02 '07

can we see this on a green tee? you'll just have to change the grey hightlight color to a green highlight color

ladykat on Feb 02 '07

I like version 2 better, actually. Sub that!!

You need a tee on this though. :-)

Torakamikaze on Feb 02 '07

All righty, color options sounds like good times. I tried it on both green and brown earlier, and both looked pretty nice. Ill get v4 up later tonight hopefully.

Thanks for all the suggestions

lightdarkness on Feb 02 '07

I like it

Torakamikaze on Feb 02 '07

why thank you sir

nintechno on Feb 02 '07

nice one tora

Torakamikaze on Feb 02 '07

any other suggestions before I submit v4 tonight?

v4 T and Crumpets, current version

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Torakamikaze
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Torakamikaze on Feb 02 '07

here you go... color options ahoy!

J-Ray on Feb 02 '07

Very nice! Now get submitten!

Torakamikaze on Feb 02 '07

Consider it submitted!

I accidently submitted it twice. whoops

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J-Ray on Mar 22 '07

this is hot

91 days later

screenwrita17 on Jun 22 '07

i like it! i think you should definitely submit it

Torakamikaze on Jun 22 '07

what an obscure bump. Thanks, it was submitted and finished scoring many moons ago.

ISABOA on Jun 22 '07

SUB IT!!!

Torakamikaze on Jun 22 '07

YOU SUB IT!

5 days later

ISABOA on Jun 27 '07

I think this needs something before you sub it - maybe a tablecloth?

34 days later

NomesMcFly on Aug 01 '07

use the darker green. kelly green is it?

Torakamikaze on Aug 01 '07

i refuse to sub this

288 days later

MeloRuff on May 15 '08

It's a crock!!! No, it's cool.

Electricsalmoon on May 15 '08

Sub, sub, sub. You love sub. Yay SUB!

Torakamikaze on May 15 '08

Never!

hippiekasey on May 15 '08

I would love to see some texture type lines in the suit? like pinstripe or something? Looks cool as is though!

4 days later

NJz Kollectionz on May 19 '08

Sub it or I'll hit you with a rock!!!!!!!! I like it on tan the best.

Orcsbane on May 19 '08

The only thing that bugs me is that extra joint in his right arm. There's the wrist, the elbow, then something else. Put a daisy in his hat. Crit mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/20551/Stick_it_to_the_Fisherman

64 days later

Jojolo on Jul 23 '08

Este diseño es ridículo y lo odio. En primer lugar, huele como una puerta vieja. En segundo lugar, prueba como un hombre sucio del queso del vacío. ¡Cuarto con diecinueveavo, su alrededor de un hombre de la robusteza ..... apenas que embroma I ama este diseño que usted oscila!

8 days later

Andy J. G. on Aug 01 '08

I likey.

Jellyes on Aug 01 '08

This is awesome, but there's one thing that sort of bugs me about it: the grey shadow of the suit on his belly is the only grey like that, and it looks out of place to me.
Also, I think ISOBOA's idea of a tablecloth is a pretty good one.

All-in-all though, sweet design. Goodluck in the running! You'll get a good vote from me:]

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BBST on Aug 21 '08

tan one def man

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eradicati0n on Sep 30 '08

kick ass man :)

7 days later

mammalwear on Oct 07 '08

Skills.

robknaggs on Oct 07 '08

thats not a crumpet u insult my proud british heritige
i lay down the gauntlet hanguard

3 days later

mr spiers on Oct 10 '08

nice

Kookaberry on Oct 10 '08

Oh I thought this was gonna be about Mr. T =|

Torakamikaze on Oct 10 '08

lol @ this was submitted in february '07 and still gets bumped

brookeboard on Oct 10 '08

T-Rex and crumpets! I love the green!

if you have time:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29635/STUBS_ROCK_HERE

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gardenofevil on Oct 12 '08

Love it. Trex and crumpets? Didn't know he was a brit haha nice job.

Comments appreciated:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29924/Road_to_My_Heart

Please and thank you! :)

anj1995 on Oct 12 '08

PRINT!

chrisrifa on Oct 13 '08

i loved the gray version.

If you have a moment, critique my designs
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29964/kite_in_the_sky
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29965/bubble_Bottle_Guy

chrisrifa on Oct 13 '08

i loved the gray version.

If you have a moment, critique my designs
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29964/kite_in_the_sky
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29965/bubble_Bottle_Guy

roniroy on Oct 13 '08

all 3 colors are really good! submit!

i'd appreciate any comment! thanx!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29728/noob_mixtape

shrimpies4life on Oct 13 '08

i like the green one the most, but you should do something about the right arm, it's really weird
and maybe you should have his tail rested on the floor instead of up

critique mine please?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29919/Peace_in_Hand

218 days later

Mighty Max on May 19 '09

this is a really cool design I like it alot, check out my designs n let me no what you think i am new to this and any feedback would be great

cheers max

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