I\'ll take any suggestions - to see larger versions see my first critique

http://www.threadless.com/critique/16663/This_Always_Happens_to_Me

nice, well done

Thankyou - should I send it in, any little things to fix?

aww a don't sub, I guess you wouldn't care to elaborate?

I would say sub it like this. im not really feeling the light blue shirt but not sure what other colors would work. Other than that though its good

yeah, I wish there was a green shirt like the background I would like better

sub it, it looks good, dont want to over work it

Okay I sent it, thanks for all the advice

I like it! Brilliant idea and nicely designed too!

Freakin' awesome, great idea, I hope to see this printed! Let me know when it's up for voting, I'll keep an eye out for it :)

Thanks!

ready to print :)
did you try an olive green shirt?
good work, good luck!

and thanks for your comment :)

this looks really good :) It'll look extra effective when theres actually a person it it too

Any comments or advice on mine would be greatly appreciated:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/16888/deconstructing_ideas

It got declined, It is too big to print :(

maybe I could put this design on a little shirt and actually have a guy tangled up in it... I'll think about that