pls check thanks

nice use of colors, but there are a few things wrong that i can see... the alligator doesn't have any legs or feet! I think the inside of his mouth should be black and make some of the teeth bigger. The eye and rest of the head look good. I think you should continue the row of spikes on its back, or at least make smaller rows, it looks strange just stopping like that. The tail has a lump in it, i suggest smoothing that out. Have you voted on my new design?

yea hes right, just correct it and it will look good.

i think it would be cool if you let half his body, or at least his tail, wrap around to the back



Any comments appreciated:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29153/Skull_Kid

Placement A is better if you ask me.

I don't like the colours that much, maybe you should try replacing one or two of them and adding purple or something like that.

agree completely with waht has been said !!

but really like the concept

check out mine (rawr and bang goes the gun) cheers

i like the perspective!! very nicely done... but where are the front arms? also i tihnk it would look way cooler if u got rid of the green background.. the alligator on its own is strong enough..



please vote and comment on mine:



http://www.threadless.com/submission/180760/Mother_Nature



its only in the running for 1 more day!