This is a character concept I made into a 3D model. I really liked the concept drawing I made for it and thought it would look cool on a tee. For the t-shirt I added the text and 2 more robots on the background.

Maybe some hand lettering, instead of the text.

Good idea!

I would change the speech bubble too. I think, if they are going to attack at least one of them should raise his arms. Their eyes could glow (not a glow in the dark; something fiery). I saw the rendered 3D model on your site. Great character! That long arm is scary! Some of my 3D-Animation-and-Robot-loving Friends (all Computer Nerds) would really want to have a T-shirt like this. Good luck! :)

I disagree with the lettering. I don't think I would do handwritten, I don't think it would match the robotic nature of it. And I'm not sure about the color of the T, I like it better on the lighter color, but maybe not cream?



Any advice on mine would be greatly appreciated.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/16981/Swinger_for_Life