woops i accidentally deleted my v1 critique.. but here's v2!



this one stands out a lot more for sure, plus the cloud is rounder and i added a free drink =)



i like the bluer-blue color better for the shirt, though i still think green may work. what say you!

That's cute, I almost want to see a face on the cloud looking away on the viewer right in shock, suprised he's just been bitten.



That may be overkill for other folks though.

bump?

I really wouldn't mind a whole forecast saying the weather is party hungry, cuz otherwise it is just a (very) cute drawing, but i can't think of a subtle way to do it. And I have to buy it either way, because the expression on the sun and they the cloud is pulled into his mouth is perfect.

woop. adorable

Wow I really like it, I love the expression of the sun!

bendy straw please!

i love it :) bendy straw ;)

the clouds look great and have style and look like you created them (i think because there is variation in the line thickness/quality) but the sun looks sorta lame (no offense!) i think it needs a little work but when it comes out i will give it a $5!

Love it with the bendy straw

haha sweeet ^_^

looooove it.

def go with the bendy straw too.

i like it on the blue shirt.

Here's a slightly edited version. I added the drop shadow, tweaked the details a little, and experimented with a differently angled straw. I also added a little sunjuice, or whatever you think that is.



yay or nay on the changes? also, im getting the feeling it could use a little more of something if the design is to be worn... like a background pattern or frame or something?

Haha

yay!

love the blues...not sure about the droplet, but i'd still buy it anyway...super cute

If you decide to do the drop out of the straw, maybe it could be rain. i love the design either way

Cool concept. I'd score it highly.

The droplet just..... AGH. I dunno, it just looks worse with it.

yeah, I dunno about the shadow, it makes it look too two-dimensional. but it does look nice on the sun.

i think im pretty much done...

woops overkilled on the 3rd post

um im new and i was wondering if we needed to keep the number of colors in our design under five or somthing, and is that why you put thos circles of color there?

oh by the way i like the shirt

yeah you need to have five or less colors in your design

Great design. I love the bendy straw B)

bump for good luck

I love this shirt! Sadly, I only discovered it after my size was sold out...hoping for a reprint