This is my first design. Thanks for your input...

I like it, but very macabre.



great style, not sure Id wear it.

added some color

This is great, I wouldn't wear it but I know people who would



the design is great, the only thing would be more shirt color options maybe?

its a brilliant design. i would wonder if the fine lines on the wings would present any issues in printing. it heavy work, i like it.

Thanks for your comments

what do you think color or no color?

should i submit it in color or without color?

maybe too much

Guna go with version 2.

hmmm creepy side note, nirvanas heart shaped box just came on, on the stereo

Yeah, a bit too much. The 2nd version was nicer.

Agreed, the background is way overpowering, and doesn't match the drawing.



Any advice on mine would be greatly appreciated.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/16981/Swinger_for_Life

lose the background.