It needs work, but I\'m not sure what yet. Thank my dad for the corny title.

i still think it looks awesome D: but yeah maybe some more something to the left or above it? and the smoke seems a little too detailed i think.

but yes its awesome, really! :)

I think it would look good on a different color shirt but I really like this design!

I like the distinction between the detailed, colored smoke stuff and the simpler rendering on the diver. I might drop the bubbles that go over the top of the smoke.



Also, I think the screen tone on the right is distracting. Could we see a solid version?



Finally, I tend to agree about the color. If you're committed to the navy/pink/orange/green, then maybe you could change the white to a light blue or something.



All in all, love the design!

thank you so much for the critique, especially o3fingers :)



different color scheme and added things..



im going to keep working on color though, just to make a few alternates.



keep critiquing please, its really appreciated.

I think it looks reallly awesome :O but for some reason the black lines seem kinda bold against everything else...maybe a grey or something? i dunno.

I like how the screentone was used in the first shirt... personally, I think it gives it the necessary detail to see that the poles are underwater. Just my opinion though :D I really like it!

Oh well, I just saw the shirt in the corner of this one has the screen tone... I really think that's the one that looks the best!

Hah hah! Cool idea! I like it!



Please, see mine: http://www.threadless.com/critique/16939/Eye_Nose